Beach Baby Blues

Another bit of random

One fat baby on the beach 

One ice cream out of reach. 

Reaching, straining and crying out

From his eyes the tears start to spout

He is making a scene

How could they be so mean

Leaving it out on the sand

And not in his hand

Will someone just come?

Help a baby so glum

Give it a little shove

And a baby some love

But now it's too late

The treat met its fate

Into the sand it did melt

And the grief he now felt

He started to cry

Then he spotted something with his eye

His mind was just blown

It was his dad with a cone

Author's Note

Top of mind writing.. Not a fan.. what do you think?

Reviews

[Ees]

I liked the title, that is why I went for this poem. The whole thing flows really well and is executed perfectly. The ending was too sweet for my tastes, but I don't think it matters, that is a personal issue for me, not an issue with your writing. Great job. Very cute.

[Lobster Goldberg]

Actually I wasn't going to end sweet.. but then I thought I would get hung out to dry if I made a baby sad =P hehe

[smurfett]

I like it!! Very cute for just something quick...I see this fat little boy with Superman ice cream just outta reach...(Superman is my favorite...so that's what it is!) lol...Thanks for the giggles!!

[Lobster Goldberg]

You are very welcome :) Thanks for reading!