My Poems

My poems are about as deep

As the first step in a pool.

Light and funny

Dry and witty

This is my only rule

I can not write about important things

It's just not in my style

I write silly types of things

Just to make you smile.

Reviews

[Sioranth Smith]

I love lighthearted poetry and prose, things that make me smile without realizing I'm smiling or just outright laugh aloud. I think we all need a "mental break" from time to time, and it's nice to see writers like yourself encouraging us to take one with your work. :)

[Lobster Goldberg]

Oh I like that. A mental break.. Thanks for reading and commenting

[Dragon]

Ha well you definitely made me smile.

[Lobster Goldberg]

I'm glad :)

[Dragon]

Me too. . .

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Poetry with a sense of humor...not serious yet simple...leave the import stuff out of the equation and make the world a bit lighter with laughter with your content of words...I have been stormed with many RR's that I do not get to see the new writings here at the Cafe...good to read this one...

[Lobster Goldberg]

Thanks Glen!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[Yellow Butterfly]

You certainly made me smile... I like you and your quirky style of writing poetry..

Smiling from Ear...................................................................................................................to Ear :O)

[Lobster Goldberg]

Glad I could make you smile :) glad I have a fan

[Lydia Shutter]

Well, then you have succeeded because I am smiling. Delightful rhythm and rhyme throughout. Welcome to WC. Lydi**

[Lobster Goldberg]

Thank you Lydi :)

[Argo]

Oh my.... you writing is perfect.....just perfect (I better close my mouth otherwise I will break my jaw) Even being a 7th grader , I would love to write like you do. I'm making a book thought.... but I just love your writing !

[Lobster Goldberg]

Thank you Leo.. Quite the compliment.

[Rita L. Sev]

;) About 90% of my writes fall into this category too... Love that first line, LG!

[Lobster Goldberg]

Thanks! I built the whole poem around that line :) I love your writing for that reason

[The Nude Writer]

Very nice poem :) love it!

[Lobster Goldberg]

Thanks for that! :)