walked away

My hopes were too high, i realize that now.

The sorrow in my heart is slowly spreading throughout my body.

My days are lazy, and my nights i spend alone.

No one to talk to, nobody I can call home.

When you left, my heart left with you.

I need you now, more than i've ever had before.

And you can not be here for me.

this shouldn't be upsetting,

 but sometimes you can't fight what your feeling inside.

I pray that you come back to me,

and ask repeatedly if your ever going to come back,

But I think you already gave me your answer,

when you  w a l k e d  a w a y  from everything we had together. 

Reviews

[Bob]

I liked how you bolded the walked away part. It reall made it stand out. There were a few capitilization problems.

For example:

My hopes were too high, i realize that now

The I needs to be capizilized up there, but it isn't anything major. Keep up the great work.

[Ourebro.]

Marvelous write.