Third Party's Fault

Ears pulsing

Heart numbing

"I'm not here"

Swift stripping

Stomach flipping

She apologizes...

Tape silencing

Hands tying

He's inside me

Muffled panicking

Useless struggling

"Please help me"

Unlawful rubbing

Endless moaning

She's sobbing...

Continuous thrusting

Eyes pleading,

"Mommy, why are you just watching?"

Author's Note

Ehh, I'm still working on it but what do you think?

Reviews

[Anthonio Joshua]

Intense... Feels like you're really experiencing those pains...
Alive, are your words!

[Alejandra Marie]

I'm so glad you think so. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm happy that my poem came across like I wanted it to. I try to get my readers to feel more than anything else.

[Anthonio Joshua]

:) That's our ultimate goal, is it not?
God bless you!

[Mayank]

Very intense, deep and slow poison.

[Alejandra Marie]

Thank you so much.

[The Twin Arenas]

It's a horrifying poem.

It's like, graphic.

paced to read like a struggle, almost between breaths.

it's intense.

[Alejandra Marie]

Thank you for reading. Like in all my poems, emotion is what I mainly try to portray. And this being such an intense topic, I really tried to put that essence into this poem. I appreciate your review.