Fall

Bored in chemistry (as always) and ended up writing this in my notes.

Closer to the edge

With every step

She took.

Holding his heart

With her

As he followed

Close behind.

She was broken

Hurting

He called for

Help.

Then she jumped.

His heart

Shattered

As he 

saw

her

f

 a

   l

     l

       .

Author's Note

Guys I know I can't write well so don't be mean, okay?

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm sounds like she committed suicide and broke his heart while doing so. You did a good job writing this, it is short but it creates a picture of the scene, you just wonder why she did it though. I liked how you put the word fall, it is like he is watching her slowly fall down.

Good Job

[Shannen Forrester]

A nice little poem, I always like seeing people use the layout to help reinforce the poem, I cant do it but it's nice to see others do it well :)