Cold Turned Warm

Just a little poem to get you cozy.

I stand outside,

in the cold,

knocking on you door,

waiting to be let in,

when you come,

you come to me with open arms,

and I embrace you,

as we kiss.

Author's Note

First poem,but,tell me how it is.

Reviews

[Jewel Ailiyah-Celeste L..]

aww...thats so strong and cut - tells a lot in so little amount of words...:)

I like it!

[Sarah>_>]

Is this poem for anyone that you know?
o.o
Because I'm imagining you doing that in real life...
o_o

[Abhinav]

exactly...tell a lot....this is soo sweet
liked it:)

[AngelEyes15]

I like this poem it's short but it tells a lot in just few words.

[L.A.]

lol!!! it reminds me of Language Arts class. "they embrace. they kiss." haha. i like it.