Just Coincidence..?

A mirror poem inspired by the idea of coincidence.

First Side:

On the Internet,

I met a boy my age.

We laughed at each other’s jokes,

And we talked every night.

He was everything I loved,

Just like him…

Was it coincidence?  

Second Side:

Was it coincidence…?

Just like him.

He was everything I loved,

And we talked every night.

We laughed at each other’s jokes.

I met a boy my age,

On the Internet.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think. It's a bit rushed, I know.

Reviews

[kat00888]

No its not rubbish. I really like it. It is short but it very nice to read and has a great flow. I loved the idea behind this poem as well. Your a very good writer

[Abilash Uttama]

It's great, somewhat like mirror poetry where every word is reversed. I really liked your work,keep it up :)

[L.A.]

Why am I just now seeing this?

Anyway, a year and a half later, it's better than ever. Me gusta muchísimo, mi amor. ♥

[Veronica]

How did I just now see this. xD Dude, thank you.