Kodak moment

Wrote this on the ride home from school.

Kodak moment

As the cloudy puffs

Billow and sluff

Their way, ambling

Over the square houses

Idly dancing their way

Over the place where

Rain is nothing more

Than a

              dark

                       wet

Afterthought in a land of

Placid blue       and

Bulging white

Author's Note

Whaddaya think?

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

excellent use of imagery, it is very vivid. after reading it brings feelings of deja vu and even nostalgia. great job.

[Chesney W.]

its nice.......

[Marie]

I think this is great imagery. I love "As the cloudy puff/ Billow and sluff...
I can just see them.