Lacking Poetry

                                Lacking Poetry

  Get up, work, home, eat, shower, assignment, class, home, eat,  sleep

  Get up work home  eat shower gas station  class assignment car sleep

  Get up TV eat guitar nap restaurant TV bike shower assignment sleep

  Get up work home  assignment eat bank school TV assignment sleep

  Getupworkbankhomeeatassignmentclasshomeshowerassignmentsleep

 

This was about true feelings, but

 

there are cars crossing the street

   the coffee burnt my tongue

      car needs to be serviced

        the old lady is a b***h     

  sarasota sucks

     rent  is  up

                  i’m poor   

                                             F**k

  !        

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tony]

Nice colorful view of a typical week or so! Although I am not offended by vulgarities, they did not seem to fit here. Or maybe so. Great Poem! Write some more!

[Rambling Prose]

This left me exhausted! (giggles)

Nicely done, I think the last few lines went out of whack. Unless you planned it that way.

Read review write sleep
Read review sleep
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