Everything....

Grass…. so green,

Sky…. so blue,

Cars…. so blurry,

Wind…. so fast,

Sun goes down,

Dark takes over,

Grass….dark as night,

Sky….full of bright stars,

Cars…. Fast asleep for the night,

Wind….picks up and blows me away,

In to the night air,

Gone from everything.   

Reviews

[Drifter]

I must say this is an intriguing poem. Although the language is simple, it seems to be saying everything changes. Of course, that's just my interpretation of it. In any case, the format is a bit different than most poems I've seen, but that isn't to say it is a bad thing. Bravo.