Waiting...

Im waiting,
Waiting for the day you walk in the door,
For the day,
You grab my hand,
Pull me up,
Take me to a place,
Ive never seen before,
Make me feel,
A feeling ive never felt,
Show me,
Something no one else has seen,
But yet,
I'm still waiting..

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Waiting and waiting and so on... Is it worth the waiting? Patience help to make the waiting better...

Other than that, it's very short and simple, yet showed a whole lot meanings between the lines, so it's pretty good tho...

[J.S. Pua]

nice..
a piece i'm sure that many can relate to..
good write..