A love that lasts forever

Im looking for a love,
A love thats hard to find.
The kind that last forever,
And that never really dies.
As i look high and low,
I cant seem to find,
A love that makes you have,
That warm feeling inside.
But if its a love that lasts forever,
I pretty sure it wont mind,
If it takes me sometime,
To find what im sure is mine.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of good wisdom in your words. Love should be a slow and easy pace. Need to know what you will be getting. I like the strong and wise statements in your poem. Last line was very good. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[questionable]

wow. when i read this, i was about to cry. really good. good job!

[Fernando Pessoa]

You couldn't be more right. Wanting something so deep and beautiful takes time, like mining for gold. You give it time and don't give up, and you'll find it.

Vincent van Gogh: “Love is something eternal; the aspect may change, but not the essence”

[KaySea]

very nice. i can really relate to this