Consumed

A poem about being consumed by your own emotions , the lengths they take you to.

Waves thundering up so high

towering above me 

as I let out a cry,

Swallowing me whole

A mist of blue and black

Blurring my sight

Starting to feel so light,

This is over

This is it 

letting out a sigh

closing my eyes

I won't be waking up,

From these lullabies

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

Beautiful and inspiring, you have a good grasp on visual imagery. Well done!

~Rob~

[alifeacoustic]

Powerful and emotion filled write. The darkest place we can be is in our own head. Thank you for sharing.

[saoirse]

thank you for your comment !:)

[alifeacoustic]

You're welcome.

[An owl on the moon]

How fierce and hungry are your waves... your thoughts confess such a dark, haunting pain flowing over you... through you... pulling you under the tide... So powerful... (Was just watching Song of the Sea about a girl named Saoirse, so when I saw your name, it only seemed right to read your words...)

[saoirse]

Thank you , Ive never seen that movie , I must watch it ^^ thanks for reading !