Let me go

Let me go

A Poem by Riley

Curl up
Let the petals crimp
The soft, supple petals

The fumes welling into the vents,
Occupy your lungs.

Release.
Please
Take a deep breath

Don’t let me go..
Till death do us part,

They fall piece by piece

You fall in one.

© 2018 Riley


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nice. the words are kind of scattered but the content is rich.
Again, mind the identity of the voice that's communicating

Posted 6 Years Ago


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 Added on December 20, 2018
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Riley
Riley

Watertown, NY



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Hello all, this is the journal of my mind where I can say anything I want, to a group of strangers. No judgement, no vain comments, just a group of people who admire the same art. I look forward to re.. more..