Darkness

hope you all enjoy

Your darkness is creeping up on me...
what could you do...spark of life blows out...
no matter i still try to be as vengeful as ever...

everything is till the same
the constellations are disarranged
something wrong with the balance of this world
tried telling you earlier but it seems my words just melt through you

but the the way you reacted was like a thin end of a rope...
gloomed and despaired being
one brings me joy setting me to bleed darkness while u sleep all jolly....

Author's Note

read and comment thank you

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

one brings me joy
setting me to bleed
darkness.
A nice write.

[Mockingbird]

very dark and depressing. no hint of hope.

[Coyote Poetry]

"something wrong with the balance of this world
tried telling you earlier but it seems my words just melt through you"
I like the thoughts and the strong statements in this poem. Darkness can overtake us. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Humor Me]

thanks man :)