Untitled II

coming going

always flowing

Never ending

Feelings ascending

Heart accelerates

INsecurity waits

Coming near

Sudden fear

Love life

Sharp knife

Sudden pain

Healing rain

Author's Note

idk where i was going with this XD

Reviews

[Jerryyoung1z]

Most times I just think I'm rhyming words and have no idea of what I'm writing, but in the end, it all fits together like a puzzle and the image I've been painting is revealed. This poem has meaning to it, the end made it clear "sharp knife sudden pain..."

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

It all seems to make sense despite the fact that you didn't know where you were going with it. Great rhyming too.

[His]

thanks ^_^