Truth

 

A poor decision

A shattered life

I see her every day

 

Her confident smile

Her dancing eyes

A soul that’s lost its way

 

She has her friends

Her seemingly happiness

No one could ever see

 

The shame, the lies

The hurt, the pain

The fighting within me

 

Reviews

[cheynicole]

love the three line stanzas it caught my eye suddenly, the only thing that was rather confusing was the 3rd line "I see her ever day" in this case I supposed "I see her every day" (I don't want you to take this personally) because I'm sure this review has a hundred mistakes too... But I just though you should know because when I look back and read my writing (that like a hundreds of people reviewed) I find there's many mistakes and feel like a total dunce cause no one pointed it out to me. But I do enjoy your writing and plan on read many more of your poems/stories/book/whatever.
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[Sarah]

Lovely poem. I liked how it was written in third person - and yet is about yourself. The final line completely changes the poem and makes it worthwile to read. Great job! =)