help is a god

if help is a god then time is a lamb

that we sacrifice for one another

so you must be a wolf in sheep’s clothing

garbed in the blood of hours and minutes

that aimlessly graze plains of your domain

each move is definitive and experienced

because you’ve been doing this

ever since we’ve first met

Author's Note

feel free to critique as harshly as necessary

Reviews

[Eleanor]

i like the biblical references. and i love the 'garbed in the blood of hours and minutes' line thats great. i feel it loses a little bit of itself towards the end though its starts off so strong then fades out after that line. but overall amazing.

[wearejareth]

thank you i might revise it then

[Figaro]

really love the tone of this and the last two lines are quite poignant, good job!