Scarlet

I was walking my friends dog and the night inspired me to revel inside of it's ebony arms :)

Scarlet night

Amber dust glows

Spirits harness flight

To galaxies unknown

Star dazzled crush

Moon flower passion

Embered twilight hush

The day turned ashen

Crystal fire-flies

Rejoice in wavered sprees

Sodalite  skies

Illuminate the sea

 Omniscient allure

Enchanting mortals

A sour mind's cure

The cold heart's portal

 

 

Reviews

[Honeypot]

I'm a big fan of walking at night too. I thought you used some wonderful images in this, that gave the reader a great sensation. Good job.

[Autumn Twilight]

This is beautiful save for the few slight errors. The mood is very well displayed for this poem. Wonderful job!

[emmajoy]

How very lovely these words are.. it's as if you've painted a wonderful picture and hung it before your readers.

' Star dazzled crush ~ Moon flower passion ~ Embered twilight hush ~ The day turned ashen ', that is a stunning stanza, it has few words but they speak a million.

Wonderful.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I loved the words you used .. they hold there place well ..alot of passion this makes the poem a vsion in the mind.

[Tallulah]

This is so beautiful.I love your expressive language and imagery. You showed how beautiful and calming the night is in such a gorgeous way. I loved this.
Crystal fire-flies

Rejoice in wavered sprees

Sodalite skies

Illuminate the sea
^ that was my fave part. I love it.

[An owl on the moon]

So beautifully expressive and moving, you illuminate the night with your descriptive vibrance! So vivid and lifting, wrapping the reader in a scarlet light... Stunning!

[Fran Marie]

A very descriptive piece~well expressed and nicely penned~
Thanks for sharing

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like this. I think "sodalite" should be "sodalist" since you are using the metaphor of the Catholic laity as a descriptive adjective here. Also, "omniscient" is misspelled; tiny flaws in a delightful piece. Kudos. And I do hope my constructive criticism will not be misconstrued as an insult. It seems a good many people on this site have never seen, let alone given, an honest and helpful review. I am all about the writing and how it may be improved as well as helping others achieve their full potential. Blessings of peace and love. :o) F.