Moving Day

 “But, Dad, why did we have to move?” cried Julia.

“Quit asking. I already told you that I got a better job and house here.”

Julia and Claudia both looked at each other with agitation, and looked out the window as they drove towards their new life.

They had driven half an hour longer, and their dad pointed out one house on top of a hill.  It was beautiful. Julia and Claudia gasped once they saw it. It had windows everywhere, it was white, and it had to be at least 3 floors high. Julia laughed. She hoped she would find some friends here.

Claudia looked around, and jabbed Julia and pointed at the house next to theirs.

There were two… well they couldn't even explain how handsome they were. There were two guys working on their lawn. Julia was staring at one with dark, long hair, while Claudia was staring at one with blonde hair. They looked at each other once they realized they were staring at them. They laughed but turned back to see them again, and noticed they were staring back.

They both blushed, and looked away.

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Author's Note

Chapter 1 people! Just remember, this was for my friends, Julia and Claudia, ok? Oh, also, the chapters are really really short ok? Tell me what you think (:

Reviews

[Shoeb Karim]

I think there is no obligation to write things long. When a short piece tells something great, I think ,it also tells something about the writer - " hmm, another talent, I see!".
I love to write things on my friends and I think I can feel the pleasure going through this piece.

[The Wave]

Nice and short. I love the scene of the house:)

[paparapapa]

Not really much of an introduction but this is pretty interesting. Looking forward to reading some more chapters! ;)

[Lost in Wonderland]

I like the imagry of the house:) I can really picture it.

[Inyourshadow]

Seems their interest in their new home stems more from the neighbourhood Boys than from the architechture of their new abode. I love the jabbing line sounds just like siblings, the shared blush also a nice touch. Keep em' coming