A Red Dress

A flowing red dress

Bright, reflected in candles

Ruby red aflame

A smile, secret, deep

Beckoning like a wild fire

An alluring flower

A light shining red

In the twinkling night, stands out

Brighter than the rest

Reviews

[Peter Rogerson]

The title says it all....
A beautiful little verse
Aimed at fragile hearts....

[Jesse W.]

That was quite the poem you had as a review :) I like it, and thank you very much :)

[Lily Finch]

Beautifully crafted piece... :)

[Jesse W.]

^_^ thank you!

[Jess]

Beautiful and creative.
Nicely portrayed.

[Jesse W.]

Thank you Jess, I appreciate it :)

[Emily]

I love it!
Very creative!!
Keep it up!!

[Jesse W.]

Thanks Emily!

[Maya]

Nice job. Poem flows well,is short and succint. Well done on imagery, and I love that you used red text for this.

[Jesse W.]

The red text was perfect for this one, I agree :) Thanks and I'm glad you liked it!

[richieb]

Your poem is rich in imagery, feelings of warmth and soft rays of light. Your poem embraces romance and whispering desires of the heart. Richie.

[Jesse W.]

Romance is on my mind a lot currently, so it's nice to be able to share some of it with y'all. Glad you enjoyed :)

[richieb]

Spring always set a young man's heart aflutter!

[Ruth]

Beautifully captured...the imagery is vibrant and leaves a smile in the heart...lovely :)

[Jesse W.]

Thanks so much :)