Teddy

I'd curl up in bed 

Feel a chill along my cheek 

And nuzzle my teddy 

I'd curl up in bed 

Feel a chill along my cheek 

And nuzzle my teddy 

Now teddy is his

I know he will do the same

Give my son sweet dreams

Reviews

[Jess]

Aww...this is so sweet. A cute way of expressing love and care towards son

[iamshadowine]

sweet poem! liked it :) keep writing

[Jesse W.]

Thanks so much, I appreciate the review!

[Ruth]

Ok, melted me :) Lovely sentiment and emotion :)

[Jesse W.]

lol, never had someone say I melted them with my writing before. That's quite the compliment, thank you! :)

[richieb]

Nice way of showing care and security to young son. Sharing warmth and contentment. Richie.

[Jesse W.]

I still have my bear as a kid and I definitely plan on passing him on. Thanks for the review :)

[Emily]

Very nice and creative poem!
Keep it up!

[Jesse W.]

Thanks Emily! :)