(68) One Rainy Night

(68) One Rainy Night

A Poem by Chris Smith Welshpoetcs


God and Lucifer met one rainy night

Satan drank a bottle of neat scotch

The lord merely sipped a glass of water

And they would talk of times long past

Of the wrongs of the world of today



"I may have only killed a handful

For that is what is said in the good book

But you, as you sit there so holier than thou

You killed millions by drowning them all

So what have you got to say to that"



"Ah Lucifer, you always seem to forget

You infected all of man back then

You cursed them and they were a plague

They would have spread and destroyed creation

I had no choice but to rid what you had started"



"Oh, I will give you that one this time

How can I compete with your following

Okay, back then I started the evil

But how can you explain your mankind now

Today they are just as evil, and I never did it this time"



"Man must follow their own path this time, Lucifer

For I can never allow myself to start once more

Both of us are now just a victim to these new times

They say they follow both us in their strange kind of way

But in reality, do they still believe in what they know"



Satan had no reply for he knew God was right

Long ago these beings always followed their hearts

And then there was a time when Good and Evil fought

Where man would suffer for the sins that they made

But in the world of today, they knew not what they did



copyright Chris Smith 2009

© 2011 Chris Smith Welshpoetcs


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The greatest deception is that there is a devil!!! We create the world we live in and blame it on everyone else..God is love..we created Him in our image and gave Him human qualities..and when we couldn't blame Him anyone, because of our obvious failings, we created an adversery to take the rap..about time to stop passing the buck and take responsibility of our lives....rambling sorry...great thought provoking read..

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Very interesting write! Your words or words of truth!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mankind is stupid, for they have forgotten the ways that are true. All around them lies what is real, but they take it as fantasy and go after what they can see. A foolish race are we...

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting write.. I like the dialog between the two..very clever..xx

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very intresting like the way you move the conversation

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An interesting piece, a lot of thought-provoking lines in here.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

curious little back and forth~ it actually blurs the fine line between the "I do this for your own good" and "I do this because I can"


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting conversation between two adversaries. Nicely done!

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This is something people don't talk about often. The reason is because maybe we have blurred the line between good and evil too much to know which side we are on! This is a subject that made me seriously think! Thanks for sharing!


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nice..our misery is a product of our own doings...you portrayed it wonderfully! God, Lucifer, Satan...nice!

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The subject matter is very powerful as well as meaningful. Good insight, I liked it a lot!

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Chris Smith Welshpoetcs
Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

Cardiff until 2004, then Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, United Kingdom



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Started writing in 1997 after a horrible attack, I found it theraputic and wrote a range of poems and short horror stories. Started sharing on the Web firstly with Yahoo 360 in 2005, then sites on .. more..