Why ask?

4 years 6 months and 16 days left

If you ask me if I love you, my only answer is yes

with no hesitations  or delaying points to explain 

definitely, my answer is yes.

And if you ask me why, then 

I would hold you in my arms 

and in silence you will see my words

through my actions. 

for my mind speak as it voluntarily spreads towards my body

sending you these following reasons:

"

if a comet blasts upon my mortal avatar

and in pain burn my skin and bones to ashes

my love shall not be bent 

for my betrayal on you, would crashed my soul 

than physically suffer from the wrath of nature. 

''

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

sometimes the shortest verses say the loudest words... this is one of those times.
a outstanding testament to commitment.
bill

[T. R. Ash]

This blew me away. Simple, yet it has so much energy. I also can see confidence behind your writing

[Wem Ortiz]

probably because i fell in love with same girl over and over again :) hehehe thank you!

[KeiseRaven]

This poem speaks so loud it shall echo through my entire being! Thanks for sharing this! Keep it up!

[Wem Ortiz]

thank you :) I'm am glad to touch your heart with my words, thanks for the review :) send me some read request if ever your write new ones and i'll find time to read yours