Regina, it's a raw and intense poem. It makes me want to know the beginning of the story, and more about the end. You express not only pain but anger and resentment, so I'm assuming the person might have somehow contributed to his/her own death. Still, you powerfully convey the emotional pain of losing a loved one. "Empty" is a simple but incredibly familiar feeling for all of us.
Regina, it's a raw and intense poem. It makes me want to know the beginning of the story, and more about the end. You express not only pain but anger and resentment, so I'm assuming the person might have somehow contributed to his/her own death. Still, you powerfully convey the emotional pain of losing a loved one. "Empty" is a simple but incredibly familiar feeling for all of us.
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