Feels So Right

A break up but really don't want to poem.

My heart is in her hand. She's squeezing. Her soul is rhythmic with my center. I'm not breathing. Entangled in her web, she's holding me tight. It's hard to let her go. She just. feels. so. right . . .

Reviews

[KAREN]

This poem makes me feel happy! Falling in love should always feel just like you wrote! Nice job!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great emotions expressed in this poem!