Flow

 

 

Words flowing out of
A pencil
Letting it taking me
Wherever it prefer

 

Not caring about all the
Rhymes, syllables, poetic devices

 

Too many rules

A relapse back to
Childhood
Being carefree

 

Rules are everywhere
Piling up with
Every step we took
Towards
A law- bidding citizen
An independent adult
A grown- up

Heart seeking escape
Disregard

 

Just a jumble of words
To express
My thoughts
At the moment

 

Reviews

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Sometimes it feels great to just let go and break some rules, as long as one doesn't hurt anyone, anything or the self.

[Barbara Walker]

This is not the poem to be editing with syntax and spelling corrections in the review! I so understand what you are saying, just to let it flow, without thought to anything but the feelings and the words those feelings produce. A short poem that says so much! Good write! Barbara