"Constellation"

“Constellation”

 

for Terri

 

 

 

For a time I existed as a god,

Her being the sweetest of ambrosia,

Her being the goddess in my eyes,

My heart and soul, her temple

Of which I sang by her immortal song.

 

A gentle and eternal hand,

The raging storms would cease,

The tumultuousness of the seas

Would ease into a peaceful sleep.

 

She…..energy, the lightning,

Beautiful, forking across an endless sky,

Lighting up the night,

Night to day,

Let us revel in her splendor!

 

In the palm of my hand I once held nebulae.

The representation, her

Of beautiful color of what was once,

Of what can be only by the grace

Of true God again.

 

With her, I touched divinity.

Miracles were made…..

Out of nothing came life

And together we created a constellation.

 

 

--MSL2008

 

Reviews

[Julie Dant]

I think this is outstanding! I enjoyed reading it immensely.

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

You have beautiful writing. The third verse kind of lost my interest, but that is just me! Can't make everyone happy right? I think you did a great job and I really love the last verse. It's amazing.

[larryb]

So nice very well written

[Ani Ashford]

This is beautifully written - thank you. I was thinking about constellations today. :) Keep on writing.

[Dead Angel]

very sweet, i'm sure the girl you wrote this for appreciated it. great description and imgery, very well done!! :)

[PureSyn]

Oh my sweetness...this totally took my breath away. Tender and beautiful in its flow and formation. You held me so captivated and enthralled. Loved your close...truly stellar~

"With her, I touched divinity.

Miracles were made�..

Out of nothing came life

And together we created a constellation."

Outstanding!!!

Nicole

[Michael W. Farrelly]

That is so beautiful, man. Not just the sentiment but the almost awestruck tone and rythm. Respect.