No one left to crave

Cheerio ol' chaste flaunting lass, cheerio.

I will break you. 

For all the times I forgave you, 

Now I must forsake you. 

To redeem all I ever gave you, 

show me how long it will take to 

Feed your conscience until it enslaves you. 

And that is what it will make you 

When there is no one left to crave you. 

Tell me, your first moment awake do 

You remember the dream, when I was there to save you?

Author's Note

I think I might be getting a new groove

Reviews

[Riverz]

you were in a groove with this one..... and ya held it too.... kudos

[misha]

This was a strong piece. The very first line was powerful. Great job!

[Sami Khalil]

A unique write with a rhythm...Bravo...........

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I like the flow and the reason for the poem. You led the reader to a very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote