Black Angel

Through the smoke his face comes into view. The face of the man who killed his wife; the man who took her beauty from the world. Fighting his fury, his mind races. After a few moments of indecision and blind passion, his mind finally clears. He raises his gun and pulls the trigger.
 

Reviews

[Heart Of A Wolf]

Matt!!! Damn!! Nice. This is the perfect contest for you- short, simple, and amazing.

[Joseph - Michael]

OK, that was kind of too short for the "murder and suicide" story and I mean very short. But, it's all good...

[Princess Pink]

"Black Angel", good to go with the title along the story content. I was curious, yet, somehow I was surprised after reading it. Truly a short, simple - Beginning, middle and end - story. Great one on this. :)

EC.

[Dawn Jones]

Short, sweet and to the point.

[Mike L. Smyth]

i like it becuz the man killed his wife....very exciting

[Annabelle]

very well written...i can see his face...his mind races and i can feel his confusion and anger... nice work!

[Kyle A. Smith]

Hmm very dramatic :D
and very stunning, I can almost
feel what the man is thinking,
and feeling.

Maybe a little overdone. but AWESOME.
its really good.