A Thousand Ways To Meet Myself

What ever happen to me?

I look back and i see an achiever

an singer

a preacher of the future 

I wanted to be something

I was different and new

The sky cries of the world

you dance in the rain and laugh

I'm great

I'm different

I'm ugly but I accept it

No more make-up to cover up the truth

I'm a leader

Lead the children of tomorrow from this'ugly

of world and pain and darkness

The sky stops crying

Because it hears my truth

Stop with the crying

Walk along with me sky

Because no one different except

Me

Myself

And

I

Reviews

[RedA4]

This is great! You accept yourself for the way you are. You sound happy for the way you express yourself in this poem as well.

[✖Lust✖]

I know there errors I rushed it

[hogan]

Once I had made the adjustments for the errors in your text, I thought this to be a very strong and very powerful piece of work, it brings out the ideas I tried to express in the poem Fantasy, it is too easy to become disillusioned with the the realities of our world. We must take control of our dreams and fantasies and try to realise those it is practical to do so with.