The Divine Of A Rose

The sun shining bright

Showing from that height

The things that perish

Right in front of our sight.

Teaching detachment

And hold on to my inner light

To help with my next life.

This moment I need to grow 

And taking this time to feed my soul

Asking to turn this seed into a rose

From the spring water that God holds.

~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~

Reviews

[Augustus]

A very typical Ryan Daniels poem if I may say so... A verse about enlightenment, elucidated by beautiful metaphors of the sun and the rose...
The first stanza reminded me of Gautama Buddha's philosophy of "Kshanabhangavada", i.e the ephemeral nature of all material things...
I loved the expression "feed the soul" and the lines that followed speaking of the journey from a "seed" to a "rose"...
Spiritual and splendidly so!

[TadKent]

Pretty and holy. Keep it up. Great rhythm.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

I like this poem is very ncie and peceful.. if that is the right word. but all in all this is a very good peom. Its very beautiful.

[Thomas Fleet]

A peaceful and enlightening write! I really enjoyed it.
I love the rhymes thrown in and vivid-detail you display in so few lines.
Great work.

[G. Anderson]

This somewhat reminds me of a prayer.
Unfamiliar with your style, but I like it.
~Gage

[Elizabeth]

This is beautiful.

[Ruth]

Wonderful piece:)
An enlightened soul! Great poem
xx

[Ice QueenJen]

The most perfect creation from God is the Rose- this is a great write Ryan.