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hiding deep inside,
safe with in myself,
nothing can take me over,
but always harm me,
my tears never escape,
my torment cant be compared
to my cry's,
my screams shout out
wanting to be heard but always
ignored,
my heart hurts but who cares,
my thoughts are scrambled,
my eyes hurt,
but i still survive maybe
with an empty smile upon
this face of mine
that shows no fear nor tears,
darkness shows but only within,
cant sacrifice my soul,
cant escape from the darkness that
holds me from with in,
but i can always be there when needed,
i can always sacrifice my time,
my heart, my love but never
my freedom nor my wildness....

Reviews

[THERISA]

A very strong and powerful declaration of yourself. Love the way, you lay out the boundaries, that you're willing to give up, for those in need. The fourth line, seems to appear out of mid-air and doesn't fit the flow of the rest of the poem. Not sure, if there is a word missing or added that shouldn't be. Otherwise, the poem flows smoothly. Thank you for sharing this moving poem with us.