Spreading My Arms

CopyRight of Whitevampire1184/Cal Vance Poems @2008

"Spreading My Arms"

Written By.Cal Vance

 

Holding them out

Forever and ever

Just waiting for you

To fall in them

 

My arms

Are spread wide

Just wanting to hold you in them

And love you until I die

 

When I die

Those arms

Will still be spread wide open

Waiting for my love

(You)

And then love you forever

And Ever!

Reviews

[Courtney Lou]

Typical. I feel like I've heard it before. You claim to have all this love. But I don't feel it showing through your writing. Your thinking too much. Just write.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

You are such a lover boy, aren't you? Ya big lug! What a perfect little write for a hopeless romantic like you! Or should I say a hopeful romantic like you?! ;) Great job!