Crawl Into My Arms

CopyRight of Whitevampire1184/Cal Vance Poems @2008

"Crawl Into My Arms"

Written By.Cal Vance

 

When your dodging life

You look for that special someone

I am that special someone

If you crawl into my arms

Life will be your destiny

 

When someone takes you

Away from your love

Crawl into my arms

And your love for me

Will be safe as can be

 

When you look up into

The sky

You imagine me

And you keep thinking about me

Then you crawl into my arms

And love me every second of your life

 

Crawling into my arms

Makes your love safe

And doesnt get injured

Or broken

Cause my heart

Is in your arms now

And heart is in my arms now~!~

Reviews

[Vanessa]

This was cute. I think that it may have been better if you were talking about yourself wanting to be in someone's arms, but it's still rather nice.

[forsaken_beauty]

Awww this was such a good write! It flows well and sounds really good.

[Dawn]

I think th overall feeling of the poem works well with the title but I think your repetition of words choices such as "love" take away from it a bit. Also, don't always explain exactly what you want us to see, sometimes poetry can be a word puzzle.

[Stacy A. Foster]

Sings like lyrics, flows like water... :)

[DarkIriswriter]

Aww how passionate you seem to be towards someone.Sometimes even realtionships can have an effect on your writing.And it shows in yours, as a very young writer you have the emotional input down.keep up the good work.

sara