THE DARKNESS

The Darkness

by: Whitney Martinez

 

It's cold, I'm wet, the rain is pouring down

It's dark, Your gone, my feet sink through the ground

My cries, so loud, though you can't hear a sound

you won't allow yourself to hear me

but baby, baby I'm screaming

alone in the dark.

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

emotional, and intense write. Nicely done, Whitney.

[chris' girlfriend]

i love that poem :D
so emotional too

[Sarah]

I really like how this poem sounds when read outloud. =o It's really intense, probably would maybe a lovely song^^ I really liked the second line the best, except it should be "you're" instead of "your" no biggie. ;) Great job with this!!! ^_^