curb stomp that hoe

curb stomp that hoe

A Poem by whitfit

What made you think

What made you think for a second

That you would get away with being the b***h that you are

I recomend, you get the f**k out of here

get out of here

 

And how does it feel

how does it feel now

with your f*****g face in that cement

And how does it taste

how does it taste now

with your mouth full of granite

 

I hear you crying

so you can stop now

It wont end, not till I'm satisfied

I want you to eat it,

I want you to bleed

Till beyond learning your lesson

b***h you asked for this.

 

So I push my foot harder

upon your rock hard scene hair

your teeth grind against the curb

TASTE THE F*****G CURB

b***h

 

© 2008 whitfit


Author's Note

whitfit
I'm usually not this angry, but, bitches make me mad :]

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I like this. So much anger. How nice it is to read raw emotion so eloquently written.
I also like the conversational tone that you use here. I can grasp the image easily.
I was thoroughly drawn in by the time I got to:
" I recommend, you get the f**k out of here."


Posted 17 Years Ago


I can tell.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on May 10, 2008

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whitfit
whitfit

Grapevine, TX



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I'm Whitney. I'm 16. And my passion is all for writing. I hope to learn about this website soon, and begin writing tons of work that interest different types of people. My main goal is to write about .. more..