Alone in the Dark

I wrote this when I was sixteen. I found it on my old account and I was shocked to read such sad emotion that I was capable of writing at such a young age. I absolutely love this.

it's cold, I'm wet, the rain is pouring down

it's dark, you're gone, my feet sink through the ground

my cries, so loud, though you don't hear a sound

you won't allow yourself to hear me

but baby, baby I'm screaming

alone in the dark

Reviews

[Elliot Kyron]

Really powerful. I love "my cries, so loud, though you don't hear a sound" saying this line aloud is so pleasing to the ear it's absurd. Very good piece!