Teen Angst..

Sorry it's been so long guys! Hope you like this one... i'd love your feedback!

"I love you",
Oh how I crave those words from your lips
I miss your touch and dream of your kiss.

I'm revealing my heart to you now with laughter and tears,
So much passion built up through the years.

 

All my feelings inside, they scare me to death
But there go your fingers, exploring...and your breath on my neck.

Awakened within me is a sense of desire,
You look at me with longing as my hands continue to perspire.

Such pleasure you bring me, merely from your presence.
My heart is beating faster now as you unzip my dress.

My Dreams from the past are coming to fruition.
Up against the wall you whisper, "My favorite position"..

My heart of is full of words that I feel I should say,
This isn't the time, for at last... we have begun our passion play!

Reviews

[Kelley]

That was quite sensual in a very romantic way.

Great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[poet.]

interesting piece. well written, but it didn't have the impact i expected. i'm not saying it's bad, just not what i expected. i can't wait to read more...

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Very nice :)

[Sarah]

This is really sweet and captures the innocence of love and flirtation at the start of a relationship. Great job & nice use of dialogue! (: