Despite All My Rage I am Still Just Ink On A Page

poetry about feeling frustrated lost and confused in a world that has seemed to turn its back on people and not even notice that our society has become so apathetic towards the human race. What ever happened to bearing one another's burdens?

 

Despite All My Rage, I Am Still Just...  Current mood:  indescribable  Category: Life ink on a page... of your latest "To Do List" that you crossed off but missed And it was at that point that she knew it just wasn't likely that she would make it through another day living life this way biding all her time til she could run away she found it oddly easy for her to accept that there was just no place for her to go next this must be where Tragedy Rd stopped where all her hopes and dreams were lost She drew in a breath, bit down hard on her lip it was no secret this would be a long lonely trip neve ready, always waiting life is just so fascinating She found it easier to just go numb than to fear for her life or start a new one her choices were few she never knew what to do but just come unglued she was never meant for a life without you She said good-bye it was all just a lie but now there's nothing left here to do 56 days sober, sedated silent and seething... what is the point of breathing?

Reviews

[Sam]

the last two lines of this are exquisite.

[Valentine]

If she was never meant for a life without him..why did she find it necessary to leave him..?? If he was abusive..she never had him entirely any way..I have lived the abused wife road and nearly lost my life..Now I live 1d000 miles away from family to just be free and not have to look over my shoulder to see where the next punch is coming from..Deep feelings in this one kid..God bless..Valentine

[Legion]

I'm a bit on the fence with this one. I like the story (message), but think the presentation could be bolstered up a bit. The last two lines are excellent however. They have quite a punch.