Pedestal

I put you on a pedestal

With your beautiful face

Perfect figure and silky hair

I put you on a pedestal

And then despise you for being there

 

Why not come down to my level

Perfection is just my projection

There is more of you to share

Meet me direct woman to man

Or, it is me that is not playing fair

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very nicely written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[a]

The rhyming doesn't seam to add up, and the poem isn't at any matter innovative, but it should be, because this theme - love between people, emotions and interaction - has already been generously interpret with outstanding words and ideas. In this case it's only an easy few step dance in romance. Still nice and raises a bit closer to heaven.

[Kitty Forzaken]

Love the flow and rhyming in this..