from God, a kiss

when God was not yet up,
looking for someone to love,
i believe there was you,
up God's heart, full of love
i was there, below God's heart,
looking for love,
for all your love, i see God,
the way God made us for love,
the way love was made for us,
is God's way of loving us,
is our way towards God

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a most powerful kiss...the lasting impression, the embrace of pure love.

[highonwords]

thank you so much, my friend, for the lovely comment and visit :)

best,
steph

[Alfred Kukitz]

God dreamed you would be there, behold you were there.......as love flourished.

regards,
al

[highonwords]

hi al :) nice to see you my friend - thank you so much for dropping by, for your lovely words :)
read morehi al :) nice to see you my friend - thank you so much for dropping by, for your lovely words :)

regards,
steph

[Nisreen]

Oh my
is this the sweetest piece i ever read ..... really !!!

[highonwords]

thank you, my friend, for your lovely comment and visit :)

regards,
steph

[Spencer Barker]

Nice writing! Your style is both unique and flowing. You stress to the reader love in multiple ways and love that is true. Truly, great work. :)

[highonwords]

oh, thank you so much, spencer, for the wonderful comment and lovely visit - glad you enjoyed the poem :)

regards,
steph

[Spencer Barker]

Not a problem! I enjoyed it very much so. :)

[highonwords]

thank you, my friend :)

best,
steph

[barleygirl]

This seems simple on the surface, but once I read every phrase & think about it, I see that the message is really deep & interesting & thought-provoking. I really love this one. These might be the best lines ever written about anything faith-based:
"the way God made us for love,
the way love was made for us,
is God's way of loving us"

[highonwords]

hi margie - thank you so much - i hope i made God happy for all the love He gives me, for all the blessings and people in my life - i hope this poem inspires a lot of people - thank you so much for reading and appreciating this :)

best to you,
steph

[barleygirl]

There is no doubt in my mind that your naturally loving approach to life is bringing lots of love into your life & this is all being smiled upon by God! (((HUGS)))

[highonwords]

thank you so much, margie, i appreciate your friendship and message so much - i wish you love and peace, my friend :)

my best, always,
steph