shiver

not blue, only slightly
purple around the mouth,
as i speak dawn, coming
for the new sky, it feels cold,
the way i am made of rain
and wind inside, lately,
as i think of you, colder
when i don't think of you,
so you're all i think about,
to keep warm from leaving,
since you left that night

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

those thoughts gradually lose their ability to warm us...after the relationship is over...or that person is gone from our lives...we hang on to the thoughts for a heat, that will never be there again, in person.

[highonwords]

thank you my friend for the insight and visit :)

steph

[Lyn Anderson]

just the thought of a person to stave off the cold.

[highonwords]

if you think about the person, you feel cold enough all ready, because the person is gone, but it's colder when you don't think of the person at all but the person is all you think about

steph

[redzone]

I know this cold, this shivering.. I like how you paint it in that "blue slightly purple" hue... thinking about it now I want to find some heat...

redzone

[highonwords]

thank you, my friend, for the comment and visit :)

steph

[redzone]

the comment was easy, but I think you need more heat in here,. lol