Chemical villanelle [[attempt]].<3

A Poem by wicked.wanderer

I say this is an attempt because I didn't like it well enough to have turned it in. The thought was there, but I feel someone more capable could have conveyed this better.

Chemicals connect, and your
Lips star in tonight’s dream.
Confession: I want more

Curves. Definitely more
In right places. It seems
Chemicals connect, and your

Eyes gaze at the floor.
Midnight’s moon beams-
Confession: I want more

Of you. Shaken to the core
I stand, attracted by gleams.
Chemicals connect, and your

Heart shudders with what’s in store.
I’d love to have a clean
Confession: I want more

Than pitiful offers of your
lies. You know what I mean.
Chemicals connect, and your
Confession: I want more.

© 2008 wicked.wanderer

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Added on August 8, 2008

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wicked.wanderer

Brush Prairie, WA

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I walk as far as they need. vegetarian. Really hit the wall. Cockamamie psyche Doodle Do. Never look back until the voices and faces don't seem to match. Chat me up: Email - sweetmockery@.. more..