Next Stop Please

My feelings come and go

Like public transportation 

Many different faces

Going different places

But for you

My feelings stay

Like a painting on a wall

As I look in the mirror

Repeating "You can have it all."

But all I want to have is you

Nothing and no one else

Everyone else is playing the same game

Everyone else is just lame

But with you,

there's no game

This is all pure

Just stay a little longer

Make me feel secure.

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems :)

Reviews

[jsu]

I think the line "But with you,
there's no game" is more symbolic. There is no actual "You" I think it is yourself that you want to find security in. Nice piece.

[Nani]

thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Alison Martin Lloyd]

These are great lyrics, very pure and clever. I really enjoyed reading it. Could almost hear it with music.

[Nani]

thank you so much

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nice poem. Loved the title! Also like your manner of writing. :)

[Nani]

[Dina]

I love this (: great word play.

[Nani]

thank you :)