Runaway

I'm bored.

Do you see me?

The real me?

Not the one you want to see.

 

I stand here, pleasing you.

but all i get, is seen through.

You walk around, like you're the best.

But really you're,

no better than the rest.

 

i'm sick and tired of these games

I hate them all, even the names.

We curse, we yell, we scream, we fight,

i don't agree, its just not right!

 

I pack my bags, i'm running away

I'm leaving you, i'm not going to stay.

Its dark outside, and i can see.

but i'm hoping you,

can't see me.

 

I start the car, i tear out of the drive.

I can see your eyes, so full, so alive!

I'm speeding now, i'm running away,

i'm leaving you, you're out of my way.

Author's Note

yes i am bored. Its lame too. =) be nice

Reviews

[Lee E. Powell]

You say it's lame? LOL. Well I liked it. I have to agree with the girl with no name about the closing stanza, i really liked that part. The entire piece was well written.

[Kiddx]

kind of depressing but so well written

I start the car, i tear out of the drive.
I can see your eyes, so full, so alive!
I'm speeding now, i'm running away,
i'm leaving you, you're out of my way

Love your closing stanza, this is very well written.

[RAZZLE DAZZLE]

Haha nice one morgan. Pretty dandy and depressing! In a good way :) I love the you're out of my way part haha...

[Michael Carr]

I won't say its a mind blowing piece.
but for another sad teen poem (no offense) it's not bad. certainly doesn't make me want to stab my eyes out (that's a good thing). some nice emotion and a good flow.
well done.