Anticipation...

yar, it's for someone. i like it;;

faces close together,
lips gently parted,
breathing synced,
eyes locked,
Hearts in throats,
and you tremble; your expression
of all the Passion you have
all your Desire. your longing
overcomes your rational thinking
and your body expresses your ache
in one way. a shake, a shiver
hardly noticeable, except to one whose
watching you close enough
that your own movements might as well
be theirs.

all this in a moment.
one Perfect moment, right before a climax
or a finale, where you know exactly
what’s about to happen. sometimes
it’s better than the actual moment, this
pause--used to convey all wishes.
and you’re closer to that one person
than anyone ever has been.
at least for a moment...

Reviews

[RockerChick]

wow, your deep. I love your poetry, hopefully I'll be at your skill level one day.

[Wolfwind Words]

A moment in time that is indeed exquisit!
I loved the way you wove your words together in just that perfect way, so the reader could feel the intensity and anticipation of that beautiful episode!
It's true, that it may only last for a moment.
But that moment last's a life time!
Great poem!