overwhelming notion

inspired by Joshua Radin

Chilly weather, warm sweaters

Ice, Ice, Ice

Sheets of ice flood my body

Frozen solid, no willpower

Struck by his kindness,

Or the overwhelming notion

He gives when I see him,

To cuddle up with him and stay there,

There in his arms - protection, warmth, stability.

To pass it up would be foolish.

For foolish, I am not; cautious maybe.

 

Author's Note

rough sketch

Reviews

[dorkfish]

yes i agree, its a bit rough and sketchy... you may want to go back through again and re read it and consider a few little things YOU might want to change. i think this could be better, it didnt exactly make me feel much of anything, i think maybe a little bit of emotion might be helpful, but very nice idea to start with.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful expression of peace, and the warmth that others can give to us... Wonderful, uplifting read!

Craig