Sweet and Pretty

just a little something

Chilly weather, sweet forever

Happy endings never last

Fate holds on but not for long,

In the blink of an eye,

You could be gone.

Lust is like a flower

Sweet and pretty

But can die in an instant.

 

Reviews

[dorkfish]

this is a nice one i must say though the end becomes awkward
"Lust is like a flower
Sweet and pretty
But can die in an instant."
that last line seems just a little bit awkward...

(i hope you dont mind my suggestions)

[Jessica M.]

a positive connotation and lust
what a rare combination.
nice write.