driving away

A Poem by SJ.

Staring out the rear-view
Gliding over asphalt
Single tear drop falls
In my lap, delusions of what
Could be, should be, would be
Never the same
After you.

© 2010 SJ.

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Dutch Jr.

Good imagery. Your description captures a single moment, and I can see a girl driving in her car, and I can see the tear drop fall into her lap. Good work.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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SJ.

Dallas, TX

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I love to write, It's what I love to do. something worth readingNov 8, 2008 - Dec 31, 2008I'm looking for any writing that has soul and can speak to mine. If you think you're up to it submit a pie.. more..